From 950e705e099f415dd1bdb82f6bbe65af4c7401e6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Till Faelligen <2353100+S7evinK@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 13 Sep 2024 09:29:23 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Wording

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 CHANGES.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/CHANGES.md b/CHANGES.md
index e542cfaad..4a4f80fc1 100644
--- a/CHANGES.md
+++ b/CHANGES.md
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@
   - Fix parsing `?ts` query param (contributed by [tulir](https://github.com/tulir))
   - Don't query the database if we could fetch all keys from cache
   - Fix media DB potentially leaking connections
-  - Fixed a bug where we would return that an account exists, if we encountered an error
-  - Edited message could appear twice in search results (contributed by [adnull](https://github.com/adnull))
+  - Fixed a bug where we would return that an account exists if we encountered an unhandled error case
+  - Fixed an issues where edited message could appear twice in search results (contributed by [adnull](https://github.com/adnull))
   - Outgoing threepid HTTP requests now correctly close the returned body (contributed by [ testwill](https://github.com/testwill))
-  - Presence conflicts are now handled differently, reducing the amount of federation requests (contributed by [jjj333-p](https://github.com/jjj333-p))
-  - Internal NATS now uses `SyncAlways` which should improve resilience against crash (contributed by [neilalexander](https://github.com/neilalexander))
+  - Presence conflicts are handled better, reducing the amount of outgoing federation requests (contributed by [jjj333-p](https://github.com/jjj333-p))
+  - Internal NATS now uses `SyncAlways` which should improve resilience against crashes (contributed by [neilalexander](https://github.com/neilalexander))
   - Whitespaces in the `X-Matrix` header are now handled correctly
   - `/.well-known/matrix/server` lookups now timeout after 30 seconds
   - Purging rooms has seen a huge speed-up